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Lovely Love

Post  Somethingg on Sun May 30, 2010 11:16 pm

Chap 1

Ako si Evangeline or Evanie for short im 21 years old My mom was fine and my father died when im 3 years old...Well im alone in my house and i never felt love...

Im Cris im 23 years old my father was the owner of all the hospital buildings in all the world My mom is a Nurse back in her days and now she is a housewife Well my future is Being a Lawyer When i was a kid butmy father told me that when he will be passed away i am the new president for all the hospital even though its not my dream

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Mom: Evanie!!! Wake Up!!
Evanie: yes mom i will be there!!

~Takes a bath~

Evanie: Good morning mom Very Happy
Mom: Just eat ur breakfast Smile
Mom: Oh and i have a new job as an assistant for the president who owns hospitals around the world
Evanie: Gud for you Mom!!
Mom: Yeah...I need to now so take care of you now
Evanie: Okay mom ill just finish this breakfast

~Leaves~

Evanie's Pov: Wow Mom is doing great for her job but Im worried if she over do it, Well Ill just nevermind that, But where's Jackie? Well all I can do is go to her house

~rings doorbell~

Ms.Row: Oh hi Evanie!
Evanie: Hi miss Row!! Where's Jackie?
Ms.Row: Oh she was picked up by her boyfriend
Evanie: Ohh...
Ms.Row: Evanie, Don't you have a boyfriend?
Evanie: Oh no, I dont even now if i can
Ms.Row: Well I know that when you do you will be happy but you need to start it off by meeting someone
Evanie: Well, Thanks for the details Ms.Row!
Ms.Row: Okay Goodluck!
Evanie's Pov: What am I doing? I might get dumped again!

~Mom's Side~

Mom: Hello is Mr.Lars is here?
Assistant Kim: Oh yes! Room 203
Mom: Thank You!
Mom's Pov: As I walked through the door I heared some shouting but i still wish my Interview will be accepted

~Knocks~

Mom: Hello, Is this Mr. Lars?
Mr.Lars (on phone): What?? 10 days?? You want my son to be married in 10 Days??
??: Yes!! I need your son to know what Love is!!
Mr.Lars: Well where can i Find a girl?
Mom: Umm Excuse Me!!
Mr.Lars: Ill call you Back, Ms.Collins!!
Mom: Hello Mr.Lars! Well I dont want to disturb you but you said you need to find a girl?
Mr.Lars: Yes! My wife wants my son to know what love is!!
Mom: Well maybe I can help you!

~Evanie's Side~

*Comes Home*
Evanie: Mom Im Home!!
*reads message*
Evanie: Still doing work food is in the microwave ill be back, Ok!
Evanie's Pov: As i walk outside to get mail i saw one pink envelope with flowers on it

~Opens Mail~

Evanie: Hello Ms.Evanie you have been Invited to Mr.Lars Party in North Avenue Street See You there in your best dress in 6:00pm tomorrow!!

Evanie's Pov: Wait What??!? A Party??? Tomorrow?!!! Im freaking Out to much!! I dont have a dress either!! What to do?? What to do??

To be continued

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Re: Lovely Love

Post  prolibag* on Mon May 31, 2010 4:05 am

hehe
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Re: Lovely Love

Post  crazyabby on Mon May 31, 2010 11:58 am

Wow. Wink ang cute.
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Re: Lovely Love

Post  stellaa on Mon May 31, 2010 12:35 pm

ankyut naman :'> continue lang po! Very Happy
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Re: Lovely Love

Post  Somethingg on Mon May 31, 2010 1:31 pm

Chapter 2-

Evane: Jackie!! Need help gonna find some clothes tonight!!

Jackie: Ok, I just know a cheap but beautiful dress store

~After trying out of all clothes~
~Evanie Chooses the dress that is pink frilly rose dress~

Jackie: How much for this dress please??

Cashier: 20$

Evanie: Is that even Cheap??
Jackie: Shut Up! We need to go to a salon and make your fizzy curly messy hair to a beauty
Evanie: Hey! I dont have time to do those things when im at home

~Straightens Evanie's Hair~

Jackie: Wow! You look Beautiful!!
Evanie: Thanks, But Im so Curious about this Invitation, Maybe it's a prank
Jackie: Stop with that Prank Thing
Evanie: Well though Im scared! One time my family made a suprise party at home it was so dark we put scary mask on us with bloody knives and when our grandpa open the lights we shouted and gave him a heart attack!
Jackie: :O Okay for safe keeping Ill Join you at The party
Evanie (murmurs): Yes! Im safe!

~As they went to the party~
~Everyone looked at Evanie~

People (Whispers): Who is that girl?

Mr.Lars:Hello Ms.Evanie!! You look Wonderful!
Evanie: Thank you!
Mr.Lars: Me and your mother set an arrange marriage for you, Meet Ivan your future husband! (I changed his name to Ivan)

Evanie & Jackie: WHAT!?!?!?!?!?

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Re: Lovely Love

Post  stellaa on Mon May 31, 2010 1:33 pm

natawa ako dun sa prank party nila lol!
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Re: Lovely Love

Post  Somethingg on Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:17 pm

Evanie: T-Th-There must be mistaken...i think im bot ready for this marriage??

Mr.Lars: You Mean you cant accept it?

Evanie: well... i think its too fast i didnt even met him for 1 day

Mr Lars: okay then 1 day and tomorrow youll marry him

Evanie: 4 days

Mr.lars: 3

Evanie: 7

Mr.Lars: 6

Evanie: 10 days! 10 days is only i need

Mr.Lars: Fine! 10 days and then u two get married!
~Leaves~

Evanie (Mind): i think im gonna get unlucky

Ivan: Hi I know we didnt met...

Evanie: Oh! Hi im Evanie Very Happy

Ivan: nice to meet you...well when i was walking down the stairs i heared you and my father are fighting for 10 days??

Evanie: Er...Dont worry that I think i might succeed

Ivan: Okay Evania -_^
~kissed forhead~

Evanie: What The??!!?

Jackie: Youve got a boyfriend *winks*

Evanie: No! I do not!!

Jackie: you must accept this marriage he looks hot and handsome ans his rich too!

Evanie: still! i cannot and he kissed my forhead for new reason!

Jackie: thats why people call it Love At First Sight! ~rings cellphone~
Jackie: oh gosh its my mom she said i need to go home its late

Evanie: well take me with you

Jackie: No...Mr Lars said you are gonna stay here ^_^

Evanie: so let me go home first because i never told my mom is staying here and didnt pack my bags

Jackie: Your mom already know and she already packed your bags and already sent it at Ivan's room

Evanie: Im gonna sleep with Ivan??

Jackie: Yes...And i think so

Evanie's Mind: this is the worst day ofmy life!!!

Chapter 4 will be later

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Post  thunder.hawk100 on Thu Jun 03, 2010 11:03 pm

Somethingg wrote:Evanie: T-Th-There must be mistaken...i think im bot ready for this marriage??

Mr.Lars: You Mean you cant accept it?

Evanie: well... i think its too fast i didnt even met him for 1 day

Mr Lars: okay then 1 day and tomorrow youll marry him

Evanie: 4 days

Mr.lars: 3

Evanie: 7

Mr.Lars: 6

Evanie: 10 days! 10 days is only i need

Mr.Lars: Fine! 10 days and then u two get married!
~Leaves~

Evanie (Mind): i think im gonna get unlucky

Ivan: Hi I know we didnt met...

Evanie: Oh! Hi im Evanie Very Happy

Ivan: nice to meet you...well when i was walking down the stairs i heared you and my father are fighting for 10 days??

Evanie: Er...Dont worry that I think i might succeed

Ivan: Okay Evania -_^
~kissed forhead~

Evanie: What The??!!?

Jackie: Youve got a boyfriend *winks*

Evanie: No! I do not!!

Jackie: you must accept this marriage he looks hot and handsome ans his rich too!

Evanie: still! i cannot and he kissed my forhead for new reason!

Jackie: thats why people call it Love At First Sight! ~rings cellphone~
Jackie: oh gosh its my mom she said i need to go home its late

Evanie: well take me with you

Jackie: No...Mr Lars said you are gonna stay here ^_^

Evanie: so let me go home first because i never told my mom is staying here and didnt pack my bags

Jackie: Your mom already know and she already packed your bags and already sent it at Ivan's room

Evanie: Im gonna sleep with Ivan??

Jackie: Yes...And i think so

Evanie's Mind: this is the worst day ofmy life!!!

Chapter 4 will be later

Oh shi*! my name is int the story!!! well its ok keep going
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Re: Lovely Love

Post  Xhavierah on Fri Jun 04, 2010 2:14 am

lol..haha nice st0ry..
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Re: Lovely Love

Post  thunder.hawk100 on Sun Jun 06, 2010 12:40 am

isnt there suposed to be a "next cgapter" on this story??
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Post  Xhavierah on Sun Jun 06, 2010 8:25 pm

yeah..just wait 4 d auth0r 2 p0st it..
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Re: Lovely Love

Post  Somethingg on Tue Jun 08, 2010 9:33 pm

Arghh so sorry to keep you waiting >_<
People i think this is maybe parental guidance or not xD just one scene

~Takes a shower~

Evanie: Oh god no I forgot to get a towel!
~Went outside the bathroom with no clothes~
~While she was getting the towel from the bed Ivan started to take off his clothes so he can take a bath because he is wearing an ipod he cannot hear anything~
~Evanie ran to the bed~
~Ivan walked but looking at his right~

POW!!!!!! They went to each other with no clothes

Evanie and Ivan: OH MY GOD!!!
Evanie: Im so sorry
Ivan: Me too
Evanie: I-I Sh-should get my towel now
Ivan:sure here
~hands a towel~
Evanie: Im sorry again o_O
~Gets dressed, While Ivan is taking a bath Evanie went outside the porch~

???:So you are new here?
Evanie: Wellyes i think so (While she is just looking at the field)
???: So whats your name?
Evanie: Evangeline Mae V. Cruz, Whats your name? ( turns around)

Evanie:O_O. JUSTIN VIBER??!!?? (My ex-boyfriend) You are a butler here?

xD tobe continued even though i Hate JB maybe i could make him a cast here at the story xD

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Post  Somethingg on Tue Jun 08, 2010 9:41 pm

Justin:Well...Yes,
Evanie: So that Ibroke up with you because you were busyall this time?
Justin: Yes, But i think it might sound weird but why are you here?
Evanie:Well Mr.Lars and mymom arranged a wedding for me amd Ivan
Justin: Oh,
Evanie: I know Oh, Well i think it's late i think i might sleep now
~Leaves~
~Holds Evanie's Arm~
Justin: Evanie...I Love you
~Kissed her in the lips passionately~
Ivan: Huh Where is Evanie? Evanie!!!
~Looks at porch~
Ivan:O_O (with a low voice) evanie...

Uyyy Love triangle nga ba?

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Post  thunder.hawk100 on Tue Jun 08, 2010 10:32 pm

OMG!!! edi paano yan cnu ung mamahalin ni evangaline?? c justine viber o c ivan????? kawawa naman c ivan!!!! nag selos! buti rin pla d cla nag kiss sa bed!
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Post  Somethingg on Wed Jun 09, 2010 6:42 pm

Umalis si Ivan at pumunta sa room niya, Nakita ko siya umalis at tinulak ko si Justin

Evanie: Justin! Ano ka ba?Bakit mo ako hinalikan? nagbreak up na nga tayo n3 years ago tapos gaganyan ka sa akin? narinig mo ba ang sinabi ko kanina? nagarriage marriage na kami ni Ivan!!

Ivan murmurs: O_O M-Marriage? yan ang pinaguusapan nila ng papa ko?

Justin: *speechless* (xD)

Evanie: Tangalin mo na ang kamay ko!

~Tinangal~
~at umalis~

~Umupo sa floor si Justin~
Justin: Marriage? :O

~sinara ni evanie ang door malakas~
~at umiyak~

Ivan: Evanie! Papasok! alam ko umiiyak ka!

Evanie: Leave me alone! D:

Ivan:Evanie...(low voice) nagulat ako na arrange marriage pala tayo....at yung nakita ko si Justin hinalikan ka parang naselos ako at parang alam ko na mahal kita...

Evanie: Mahal mo na ako agad sa isang araw pa lang? indi mo pa alam ang Favorites and Dislikes ko o yung iba pang nagdescribe sa akin!

Ivan: Indi naman ganun Evanie Diba, Meron isang tao natinawag niya Love at first sight?

Evanie:Hindi Naman kasi ako naniniwala ako doon eh!

Ivan: Sana alam mo kung ano ibig sabihin ko, pero nakalock ang pintuan nandiyan naman kwarto ko edi matulog na lang ako sa sala

~inopen ang door~

Evanie:Ano...pwede ka na matulog kwarto mo pala toh eh

Ivan: Wag na baka hindi ka makatulog

Evanie: Salamat Ivan

Ivan: Pwede bukas punta tayo sa park magpicnic?

Evanie: tignan ko lang kung pwede


Ivan: Thanks

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Post  Xhavierah on Wed Jun 09, 2010 8:07 pm

ateh..nxt na..xD
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Post  Somethingg on Thu Jun 10, 2010 3:54 pm

The Next Day...

Ivan:Evanie alis na tayo! diba magpicnic tayo sa park?

Evanie: Huh? diba sabi ko kung tignan ko kung pwede!

Ivan: Sige na!

Binuhat niya ako at binaba niya ako sa bathroom and sinara ang pintuan

Evanie: Ivan!!!
Naligo na lang ako

Sa park

Ivan: ilalagay ko na ang mat at ang pagkain upo ka muna sa chair d2

Evanie: Sigh O sige

pagbalik ni Ivan
Ayan na inayos ko na

Evanie: tamang tama nagutom na ako eh!

Ivan: Ayan o luto ko habang tulog ka pa *pinasubo* ( xD alam ko yung mga readers d2 macheesy sila xD)

Evanie: wow ang sarap magaling ako konte magluto pero parang eto ang friest try ko kumain na fancy


to be continued busy eh.... xD nanonood ng mga videos nakakatakot maganda! search niyo: Childrens r Skary

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Post  Somethingg on Thu Jun 10, 2010 10:00 pm

Evanie: Oh eto Ponkan *binigay*

Ivan: *kinain yung hate*

Evanie: half lang kinain mo?? bakit ayaw mo ubusin?

Ivan: ayoko ko eh *nagpalayo sa kanya*

Evanie: kainin mo na!! *lumapit*

Ivan: ayoko pa rin!

Evanie: sige na!

Ayun hindi alam ni Ivan may bato sa likod niya nahulog sabay ako nakahiga kami tumingin kami at hindi ako makagalaw tinitignan ko lang siya Anu gagawin ko???

Ivan: *Kinain ang half ng orange*

Evanie: kala ko ayaw mo yung half??

Ivan: Hindi ka makagalaw eh Very Happy

Evanie: Hmmpp..
Nararrator: pagkatapos mag 1st date sila I mean pagkatapos mag picnic *wink* xD pumunta na sila sa bahay

Maids and Butlers: Hello Ms. and Mr. Lars

Evanie: Lars?

Ivan: last name ko

Evanie: ay oo nga pala

Justin: Hello Mam *bows*

Evanie: J-j-ustin

Justin: Your massage spa is ready

Evanie: thanks but i dont need it

Justin: Huh? then if you are not gonna use it our 900,000$ will not be refunded and the massagers went traffic so thy were late because they love at 9000 miles here in the house but you still dont want it? Well we can leave them?

Evanie: Uhmm... i thats it then ill take the massage

Justin: Okay Mam

Habang nagmassage si Evanie sa Spa room tinawag ni Ivan si Justin

Justin: Yes sir?

Ivan: Bakit mo hinalikan si Evanie?

Justin: may relationship po kami nun noon

Ivan: Noon pa yun pero bakit?

Justin: Sir mahal ko po siya

Ivan: Eh bakit mo siya nagbreak up?

Justin: Sir busy ako kasi sa pagtrabaho

Ivan: ay hindi lang yun may isa ka pang girlfriend kaya wala kang time kay Evanie

Justin: S-S-Sir paano po niyo alam??

Ivan: ang mga workers dito kung aalis dapat may excuse pero ikaw umalis na lang kaya sinundan namin ikaw

Justin: Sir unfair naman yun

Ivan: Anung unfair yun?? IKAW ANG UNFAIR!!! * SINUNTOK*

Evanie: Wow ang sarap ng spa baka pwede din sumali si Ivan

*Bumaba sa stairs*

Evanie: Ivan?? Ivan!!

*nakita niya sila nagaaway*

Evanie: Ivan!! Justin!! tama na!!

Ivan: anu ka ba Evanie!! niloloko ka lang niyan!! may gf na siyang bago!!

Evanie: Justin?

Justin: Totoo yun

Ivan: *Sinuntok ng malakas*

Evanie: Tama na!!!

Pumunta si evanie sa harapan ni justin natamaan si evanie sa suntok ni Ivan... Nadugo siya ng madami habang nawawalan siya ng malay kasi sa blood loss narinig ang sinabi ni Ivan

Ivan: Evanie!!! Im sorry!!!

Evanie: with low voice) tama na....

Ambulansya: WeeeeeWoooooWeeeeWoooo

Ivan: doctor anu nangyari?

Dctor: okay lang siya pero parang may problema

Ivan: anu po yun??

Doctor: Magiging asawa mo ba siya??

Ivan:opo

Doctor: ang problema kasi may sakit si evanie

Ivan: anung sakit?

Doctor: kung magkakaroon siya ng anak baka mamatay ang baby at mabubuhay si Evanie o baka mamatay si Evanie at mabubuhay yung baby

Ivan: dapat sabihin ko toh kay Evanie

Doctor: Ivan, kung ako ay ikaw ayoko muna sabihin kay Evanie

Ivan: anung gagawin ko??

Doctor: maghihintay na lang tayo kung may miracle o hindi


Next chalter maybe later or tomorrow

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Post  Somethingg on Fri Jun 11, 2010 8:26 pm

Ivan: Hinda ko talaga makalimutan ng sinabi ng doctor may sakit si Evanie. Sino ba ang mabubuhay? Nakaupo ako sa katabi habang nakatulog siya nakatingin lang ako sa kanya hinawak ko ang kamay niya at dumating si Justin

Justin: Im sorry po Sir

Ivan: You are fired!

"Sir" Justin said while walking to Ivan
"Just leave me alone! Just give space" Ivan said with a low crying voice

Justin Left without a single word but I still keep thinking about Evanie but then mYbe Ill get worried when Justin get suicide and this whole fault was mine...

Gumising si Evanie at tumingin sa room

Evanie: Nasa hospital ako??

Ivan: Oo *tumawa*

Evanie: Tapos na ako okayna ako tayo na ako

Ivan: oy wag muna sabi ng doctor lalabas ka daw ng 1 day

Evanie: 1 day?!!?

Ivan: bakit? gusto mo mag 2nd date pa tayo??

Evanie: Hindi no! sino kagsabi nun?

Ivan: The Blue Bird told me Razz

Evanie: anung blue bird??

Ivan: ako kasi alam ko naenjoy ka eh sa park

Evanie: Gusto ko na Umalis D:

Ivan: o sige tanong ko ang doctor

Umalis si Ivan at oumunta sa Doctor's Lounge

Ivan: Doctor pwede na po ba umalis si Evanie??

Doctor: Oo pwede na!!

Ivan: Salamat pow!!

Pero bago kami umalis pinakain ko muna si Evanie kasi alam ko gutom siya pero dumating papa at mama ko kaya nakaupo lang ako doon

Papa: Ay kala ko may nangyaring masama sa iyo Evanie!

Mama: ako din, Ivan at Evanie usap muna tayo

Ivan: Anu po yun Ma? sabay upo

Mama: eto ang promise niyo sa akin ahh...

Ivan: anu po yun?

Mama: Evanie dapat Wag ka muna magpabuntis before magwedding

Nagulat si Evanie habang umiinom siya ng tubig kasi sa gulat naspirt ang tubig niya kaya nabasa ang table

Ivan: Ma! Bakit mo sinabi yun? habang nililinis ang table

Papa: okay lang yun kung buntis bago magmarriage pero dapat baby boy ahh

Ivan: pagusapan namin ni Evamie 2 days pa naman ahh

Evanie: Oo nga poh...Habang naglilinis ng tubig sa lamesa

Papa: O sige alis na kami

Ivan: Bye pa! Ma!

Mama: Take care!!

Umalis na sila

Evanie: Pregnancy before Marriage?

Ivan: pabayaan mo na yun!

Evanie: totoo ba magkasundo tayo after 10 days?

Ivan: Evanie, May confession ako sa iyo...Pagdating mo lang sa bahay mo parang mahal kita

Evanie: Anu ibig sabihin mo?

Ivan: Mahal na mahal kita Evanie

Okay stop muna kasi baka ma low bat ang ipod touch ko dito hindi ko pa naman na save xD kung may battery pa continue ko toh maya

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Re: Lovely Love

Post  Somethingg on Fri Jun 18, 2010 9:27 pm

Evanie: Ivan...Ang aga pa kaya hindi ko pa alam ang feelings ko sa iyo eh im sorry

Ivan: Okay lang yun....

Ivan: Soo...Second Date...?

Evanie: Ivan!! habang tumatawa

Evanie: ayy oo nga pala narinig ko boses ni Justin kanina

Ivan: wala lang yun

Evanie: O sige pagsinabi mo

Paguwi nila sa bahay maynakita silang babae nakacoat na kulay red sa harap nila bago magsalita si Ivan pumunta ang babae sa kanya at nayakap niya siya

???: Darling!! (with a little british accent)

Ivan: Melanie???

Melanie: So you remember me?

Evanie: Who...Who are you??

Melanie: Im Ivan's Girlfriend!

Evanie: o_O Girlfriend??!?

Ivan: Ex exactly

Melanie: what? I thought we were in a relationship??

Ivan: that was 1 year ago!!

Evanie: Right...I should go now...

Umakyat si Evanie sa stairs

Melanie: Sinong panget na babae yun??

Ivan: my Fiance

Melanie: Ex-Fiance noh? cause i know u still love me

Ivan: no you are my ex she is my fiance now get out!!

Melanie: Soo harsh kakarating ko pa lang sa states aalisin mo pa ako

Ivan: Melanie!!! Anu ba gagawin mo dito?? igagastos mo lang pera namin??

Melanie: Oo

Ivan: Melanie! Umalis ka na!!

Melanie: stay muna dito ako for 1 week hindi pa ako nareserve sa hotel ko eh

Ivan: F-Fine

Melanie: Yay thank you!!

Habang hinalik ni melanie ang cheek ni Ivan bumaba si Evanie kasi nagutom siya

Evanie: Im gonna get some Fo-

Tumalikod si Ivan at sinabi niya

Ivan: Evanie!! mistake lang toh

Evanie: H-H-have a nice relationship! ~tumakbo papunta sa room~

Ivan: Evanie!!

Melanie: mwuhahaha akin lang si ivan!!

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Post  thunder.hawk100 on Sun Jun 20, 2010 1:32 am

i have a feeling na ung nangyari kay ivan at kay bieber mangyayari din kay evanie at melanie(bka ha!) kya lng imbis na suntukan sabunutan naman......
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Post  thunder.hawk100 on Sat Jun 26, 2010 3:34 am

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Post  Somethingg on Sat Jun 26, 2010 11:46 am

So sorry peeps!! mayy school kasi eh !! bawal maglaptop

Evanie: *Iyak*

Ivan: Evanie...Sorry na

Evanie: ayy oo nga pala wala pala akong feelings sa iyo! Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad
Evanie: Pwede umalis ka muna?

Ivan: O sige

~Melanie's Side~

Melanie: Walang hiya yung babae!! baka gusto pa ako ni Ivan?? dapat lang

~habang hindi tumitingin si Emlanie natamaan niya si Justin~

Melanie: Oy!! butler!! tumingin ka nga ng mabuti!!

Justin: Sorry po...Wait ikaw po ba ang ex-girlfriend ni Ivan?

Melaine: anong ex??hindi kaya kami nagbreak up, eh ikaw? bakit mo tinanong yun?

Justin: kasi alam ko kasi ang fiance niya eh

Melanie: Si eVANIE?

Justin: yes

Melainie: ka ano mo naman siya?

Justin: sigh hindi ko nga alam eh kung girlfriend ba o ex

Melaine: Hmm... May naisip akong plano para magbreak up sila!!

PPabitin po dami pang gagawa assignments ko pa pow study pa xD

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Post  Somethingg on Sun Sep 26, 2010 7:49 pm

P.S. Bakit konte tau nagooffline? XhavierX (I THINK) pa update ng 100 days of her happinness!! D:

Day 3

Evanie: *silent*

Ivan: Evanie...Im so Sorry!!. Alam ko gutom ka kaya ito *bigay pagkain*

Evanie: Ivan...

Ivan: Oh?

Evanie: Ask lang..Makakasundo ba tayo ng 10 days? Day 3 na ngaun nagaaway pa tayo

Ivan: Evanie...*Niyakap*

Evanie: :O *pushes* ...*blushes*

Ivan: Evanie?? nagblublush ka?

Evanie: Ano??!? Indi ahh! alis muna ako...*Pumunta sa sala*

~MeanWhile~

Melanie: Evanie!! Gusto mo punta tayo sa spa?

Evanie: O sige, parang masakit katawan ko eh

~Sa Spa~

Melanie: Wait lang kunin ko ang towel ko

Evanie: O sige

*Lumabas si Melanie*

Melanie's POV:* lock door* Have A fun Trip Evanie! Twisted Evil Twisted Evil

~1 hour later~

Evanie: Ah! Sarap pumunta sa spa! *Opens door*

Evanie: Huh?!!?!? Lock!~?~??

Evanie: Help!! Melanie?? Help~!!!

~Sa House~

Ivan: Melanie, Nakita mo si Evanie?

Melanie: Hindi...

Ivan: Arghh! *Umalis*

~Lumapit si Justin kay Melanie~

Justin: Saan na siya??

Melanie: Nilock ko siya sa spa room

Justin: Yan yung Brilliant Plan Mo?!?!!

Melanie: Oo, Bakit? Masama?

Justin: Baka mahimatay siya kasi baka magutom o anu pa na Dangerous!!

Melanie: Wala akong pake!!, Pagnamatay siya ako ang papalit sa place ni Evanie!!

~MeanWhile~

Evanie's POV: nand2 pa ako ng 1 day na trap in this room without food *starving* Ivan!! Please rescue Me!!

Ivan: Ask ko kaya si Justin!

~Tumakbo~

Ivan: Justin!!!

Justin: Yes Sir?

Ivan: Alam mo ba kung nasaan si Evanie!?!?

Justin: Sir...

Ivan: Ano?!

Justin: Nasa spa room, Plan po yun ni Melanie para magbreak po kau

~Tumakbo si Ivan~

Ivan: Evanie!!!! *Sinipa ang door*

Evanie: Low voice*. Ivan....*Pass Out*

~MeanWhile~

Evanie: *Gumising* nasaan ako??

Ivan: Nasa Bhay Very Happy

Evanie: Ikaw ba nagrescue sa akin?

Ivan: Sino pa ba?? Very Happy

Ivan: Kinausap..ko si Melanie at pinalayas ko...

Evanie: Ivan..*Nilagay kamay niya sa shoulders ni Ivan* Baka may bad feeling may mangyayari sa kanya.

Ivan: Kung nangyari yun I will never forgive myself.

Evanie: Ivan *Niyakap*

Ivan: *Chuckle* Gusto mo mag 2nd date tayo?

Evanie: Isipin ko muna!

Evanie's POV: I didn't believe at love at first sight but I think I believe it now! Very Happy


PABITIN!! POW!!

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Re: Lovely Love

Post  Somethingg on Mon Sep 27, 2010 10:30 am

Chapter #? ( indi ko maalala)

Day #4 - 9:30 am

~Morning Time~

Evanie: *yawns*

Ivan: Hello my Darling ;D

Evanie: Breakfast in bed?

Ivan: Uu
Evanie: Ikaw ba nagluto?

Ivan: Uu naman! Sino pa?

Evanie: Kailan mu ginawa yan?

Ivan: nung 8am

Evanie: Weh...

Ivan: Bilisan mo na kumain. Pupunta pa tau sa 2nd
Date natin!

Evanie: Ha?!?!

Chapter #4 (i think xD) "Second Date in the Carnival!"

Ivan: Evanie! tapus ka na maligo

Evanie: Malapit na!
~Sa kotse~

Evanie: Saan naman tau pupunta?

Ivan: Sa carnival..Syempre

Evanie: Carnival??

Ivan: Ou

~Pagpunta sa Parking~

Ivan: Baba ka muna sa kotse hahanap ako ng parking

Evanie: Okay,

Pabitins


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